This was a strange new way of criting and getting feedback as we had to properly grade each others submissions. The highlight of it was getting back a grade I can actually, if you will, resubmit.
Before the crit I could easily say that I had all 5 Silent Movies completed along with my 4 idents for the Top 10 Things brief. The final title sequence, although 60 seconds long I haven't full finished what I was planning to do with it so much has been left without any animation. This was flagged up in the crit as being like a slide show. and is my main focus on amending at this point so close to the deadline.
The burnt disk worked fine which is a big positive to begin with.
As the wireless internet had some technical difficulties shortly before the crit nobody was able to assess the blogs which did make it difficult to effectively crit others work and I would imagine the same would have applied to my own.
Instead we just graded each other on the 4th and final grading criteria 'Demonstrate practical and conceptual dexterity in the use of appropriate techniques, processes, media and approaches to the production of practical work. (SELECTION, PRODUCTION & RESOLUTION) Which is 40% over the overall grade for this module.
Feedback sheet 1
Grade out of 40
23
Comments:-
- good visual consistency
- 'Bear Species' not 'Bears Species'
- no visual consistency between idents and 60 second piece
- bit slide show like but really crisp imagery, very BBC one
- silent movies - consistent, good colour pallet/well work
Feedback sheet 2
Grade out of 40
32
Comments:-
- silent movie 5, brilliantly executed
- like the way the ONE logo appears on ident 1 - although not a massive range of transitions
- maybe come in a bit soon on ident 2
- ident 3 most interesting
- polar bear, strongest ident, like the way it appears
- type too quick at the start of the 60 seconds, needs to remain on screen longer
- music a bit over epic
Action Plan
As I only have 24 hours to amend any problems and finish everything of I have to be quite rational with what I choose to do now.
- tweak the silent movies so the execution is up to the standard of ident 5
- alter the aesthetic so they all look like a set keeping the colour pallet the same
- go back over the type in the main sequence to ensure that it all stays on screen long enough to be read by the audience
- finish editing the sequence to prevent the 'slide show' effect
- review the idents to give them slightly more variation in transitions and make them all equally as interesting as ident 3
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